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i have been to Tai Mei Tuk today.My friends and I play happily there,we played hide and sick there.We barbecued there with our class teacher Miss Ng too!Then we ride on the boat,my classmate Mary was so afraid of water so she didn't play anything near water.Near the sea , there are a lots of baby crab,they are very tinny!We have a lots of fun there!Hope i'll have more fun at the outing next year!

I went to Tai Mei Tuk today.I went there by school bus.We went there with my classmates.We went there in ten past eight .First,we had a barbucue.Then,we played hide-and-seek.Next,we took some photos.After that,we caught some.butterflies.At last,we flew a kite.We leaved Tai Mei Tuk at half past three.
We were very happy.I hope I will have a happy travel next year.