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2007-01-16 3:23 am

Sport gets a lot of attention now day, there are good advantages and disadvantages about sport.
On the good side, sport can exercise improve your health. And also it reduced risk of major illness as diabetes, heart diease etc. Moreover it cans keeps you fit and improve self-image.

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On the other hand, there are bad points about sport. Such as the football betting. And the cost of equipment is too expensive. Final is will hurt yourself. In condusion, the good points of doing sport outweigh the bad points. Therefore we need to do more sports in empty time.

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franziska

2007-01-16 9:32 pm

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Peoples pay a lot of attention nowaday. There are advantages and disadvantages on sports.

Exercise does so many great things for you, that you may not be aware of them all. Exercise is a simple solution for stress, weight problems, depression, menstrual cramps, boredom, and conditioning of the heart. It builds self-confidence and self esteem and feels great.
It is also prevents the risk of major illness such as diabetes, heart diecease or vice versa. It keeps you fit and improve self -image as well.

Sports sometimes come into the scene in cycles or fads. You may want to get involved in a particular activity just because it's the one that everyone else is doing. Going for a popular sport can be a good way to get involved in athletics, but it can also be frustrating, discouraging and sometimes expensive.

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