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**I suppose that you have an application no. for whatever position you have applied.
**Normally, you are not supposed to urge for salary increase after you are notified for being employed.
Anyway,the outcome should be something like this.
Dear Sir/ Madam,
With reference to my application (application no.) for the post of ________ which was published in (Newspaper name/ Website) with reference no. __________, I would like to express my concern.
First of all, I am very delighted that I was employed by your company. However, as the salary offered is not quite enough for daily expenses and so I would like to be offered by $XXXX per month. I know it is quite acceptable and rude to make such a request. However, I really appreciate the opportunity offered. Therefore, please kindly consider my request. I would do my very best in my work if my request is accepted. Thank you for your time and attention.
Should there be any inconvenience caused, please forgive me.
Yours sincerely,
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