高人改grammar - 10分

1. I would like to ask our senior engineer - Mr. Yang, to go over the details of the EBP. Please welcome Mr. Yang. (如果您需要观众鼓掌的话)
I'll pass / hand it over to Mr. Yang. (如果您不需要观众鼓掌的话)

2. 没问题！！
I am afraid I would need to look into that point, and respond to your comment a little later.

3. I'll go (get / to get / and get都是对的) someone who can explain it in more detail.
但我会用
I'll introduce you to someone who can explain it to you thoroughly.

4. 没问题！！
We give a lot of concern to the workers' welfare.

5. 没问题！！
What a joy it is to have friends coming from afar.

6. One three-and-a-half inches (复数) floppy disk can hold the contents of (these；在您拿着 / 指着 12本 encyclopedia volumes 的情况下才可以用 these) 12 encyclopedia volumes.

7. Although we have received quite a few requests from customers and dealers to make a wider-screen (是对的，因为它是名词；而wider-screened是形容词，后面一定得加名词) and lighter EBP, we find(OR we have found比较好；因为您一直在用 have / has 的现在式) that, with the old model's small screen (with the small screen of the old model 会比较通顺), the amount of information which appears(现在式) at any(不懂解释；但我们都加的) one time is(现在式) insufficient.

2007-01-15 10:01:59 補充：
7. Although 只可以在 [虽然] 的情况下才可以用的。既然您的customers 已经request 了 widescreen 的时候， 您就不能用 although 了！

2007-01-15 10:02:31 補充：
We have already received quite a few requests from customers and dealers in providing a wider screen (不用 - 即dash；因为 wider 是形容词) and a lighter EBP.

2007-01-15 10:02:52 補充：
Our review of the old model has affirmed / confirmed such shortcomings, since the amount of information which could appear at any one time is insufficient.

I would like to ask our senior engineer - Mr. Yang, to go over the details of THE EBP. 有請Mr. Yang!
I am afraid I WILL HAVE TO/NEED TO look into that point, and respond to your comment a little later.
I'll go GET/AND GET someone who can explain it in more detail.
We give a lot of concern TO the (you can use OUR here - gives a sense of possession) workers' welfare.
What a joy IT is to have friends coming from afar.
One three-and-a-half-inch floppy disk can hold the contents of (you need to put nothing here) 12 encyclopedia volumes.
Although we have received quite a few requests from customers and dealers to make a WIDER-SCREENED and lighter EBP, we FIND/HAVE FOUND that, with the old model's small screen, the amount of information which appeared at one time was insufficient.

2007-01-15 03:05:38 補充：
有請Mr. Yang! - Just say "Mr Yang" or give him a nod. You can do anything to give Mr Yang a signal to say that it's his turn to speak.

- I would like to ask our senior engineer - Mr. Yang, to go over the details of the EBP. 有請Mr. Yang!
- I am afraid I need to look into that point, and respond to your comment a little later.
- I'll go to get someone who can explain it in more detail.
- We give a lot of concern to the workers' welfare.
- What a joy it is to have friends coming from afar.
- One three-and-a-half inch floppy disk can hold the contents of these 12 encyclopedia volumes. - Although we have received quite a few requests from customers and dealers to make a wider-screened lighter EBP, we found that, with the old model's small screen, the amount of information which appeared at one time was insufficient.