有沒有人可以幫我改一改文法&改通順一點??(英文好的請進)

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2007-01-15 9:49 am

The aim is to search information from Fairmont hotel reports, case study, and government publication, as those of the sources provide information about green environment program from Fairmont hotels and the benefits to their guests. There are some ideas about the programs how to influence the hospitality industry.

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Environmentalism is promoted within the hospitality industry and the current trend in society practice development which related to deductive for this research proposal. In fact, the concept of environmental protection is accepted, recognized, and overthrown difficultly by human.

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joyce

2007-01-15 2:34 pm

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The aim is searchng information from Fairmont hotel reports, case study, and government publication. As those of the sources provide information about green environment program from Fairmont hotels and the benefits to their guests. There are some ideas about the programs how to influence the hospitality industry.

你最大的問題是第一句已經霸住三行

同時,is後面唔會有 to

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