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2007-01-12 9:38 am
BC struggles to explore high quality films from all over the world, organizing thematic film programmes and all kinds of cultural activities. Let the youth and the movie fans have the opportunity to contact different kinds of movie culture.
HK Film industry with a downward tendency in the past few years. UA & BC enhanced the movie quality & the cinema facility unceasingly. To attract the customers go to cinema enjoy the movies again. Let the HK Film Industry to develop continuously.

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2007-01-12 11:13 am
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HK Film industry with a downward tendency in the past few years. UA & BC enhanced the movie quality & the cinema facility unceasingly TO attract the customers go to cinema enjoy the movies again. (without break)

Let the youth and the movie fans have the opportunity to contact different kinds of movie culture.
This can't be a sentence on their own like that. I've corrected them for you:
This provided the youth and movie fans have the opportunity to MAKE contact different kinds of movie culture.

Let the HK Film Industry to develop continuously.
Best to use an exclamation mark here.
Let the HK Film Industry to develop continuously!

2007-01-12 03:14:40 補充:
Sorry,Let the HK Film Industry develop continuously! You don't need TO in front of DEVELOP.
2007-01-12 5:26 pm
BC struggles to explore high quality films from all over the world, organizing thematic film programmes and all kinds of cultural activities. Let the youth and the movie fans have the opportunity to contact different kinds of movie culture.
HK Film industry with a downward tendency in the past for a few years. UA & BC enhanced the movie quality & the cinema facility unceasingly. To attract the customers to go to cinema to enjoy the movies again. Let the HK Film Industry to develop continuously.

(i think is okay now)
2007-01-12 9:41 am
better than before.


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