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I always go to Taikoo Shing shopping centre.The shopping centre is in Taikoo Shing. There are lots of botiques,gift shops and toy shops in the shopping centre.There are many famous brands like “red earth”, “McDonalds” and “Toysrus”, so I think all sorts of commodities are available in the shops.

Once, I went to an exhibition of Chinese paintings at this shopping centre, because I thought the paintings were elegant.

I visited this shopping centre at Christmas. I got there by taxi. I arrived there at 4:00pm and left there at 8:00pm. I bought some ornaments named“Toysrus”as I decked out my room.

I also ate some food, because it was fine and tasty. I think there are everything that one expected to find.


In short, this shopping centre is prefect.

I always go to Cityplaza, a shopping centre in Taikoo Shing. There are lots of retailers selling clothings, gifts and toys, including famous brands like Red Earth, McDonald's, and Toys'R'Us. Thus, I think that one can buy anything in the shopping center. The shopping centre has an exhibition of Chinese paintings, which I think are elegant.

I visited the shopping centre on Christmas day. I got there by taxi and arrived at the usual hour of 4pm; I left at 8pm. I bought some ornaments at Toys'R'Us because I wanted to decorate my room. I also had some food there, and the food was fine and tasty.

The shopping centre has everything that one expects to find, and I think that it is perfect.

I always go to Taikoo Shing shopping centre which is in Taikoo Shing. There are lots of botiques, gift store and toy store in the shopping centre. There are many well-known brands like “red earth”, “McDonalds” and “Toysrus”, so I think all sorts of commodities are available in the stores.

Once, I went to a display of Chinese paintings at the shopping centre, because I thought the paintings were graceful.

I visited the shopping centre again at Christmas. I got there by taxi and I arrived at 4:00pm and left at 8:00pm. I bought some ornaments named“Toysrus”as I decked out my room.

I also ate some food there and it was excellent and tasty. I think there is nothing that one likely to find.


In addition, this shopping centre is prefect.

I always go to Taikoo Shing shopping centre.[我覺得呢句有點多餘sorry：The shopping centre is in Taikoo Shing.] There are lots of boutiques,gift shops and toy shops in the shopping centre.They are many shops of famous brands like Red Earth, McDonalds and Toys 'R' Us. Therefore i think all sorts of commodity are available in this shopping mall. (我覺得之前果句有點怪... 所有的店有所有的野賣..)

I went to an exhibition of Chinese paintings in this shopping centre too. The paintings was elegant.

I visited this shopping centre at Christmas. I got there by taxi. I arrived at the shopping centre at 4:00pm ,and left at 8:00pm. I bought some ornaments in Toys'R'Us, because I would like to deck my room.

I also ate some fine and tasty food there. I think the shopping mall have everything that one expects to find.

I think this shopping centre is perfect.

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