明天我要考英oral,,一分鐘介紹自已，應該點講好呢??

Good moring(afternoon), Miss (SIR)
I am ___1__.You can also call me ___2__.I live in___3___. There are ___4___ people in my family. They are __5___ , ___6__ and ___7__.(8) I like play ___9___ because it is ____10___. It can also____11____. Besides, I love ___12___. It is really ___13___. My favourite food is ____14____. My favourite colour is___15____. I enjoy __16____subject most. And I enjoy my school life . Thank you.

1: your fullname
2: your english name
3: place that you live
4: no. of people in your family
5,6,7: people in your family
8: people in your family's job
9: your hobby
10: reson of you like this hobby
11: another reson of you like this hobby
12: your hobby
13: reson of you like this hobby
14: your favourite food
15: your favourite colour
16: subject you enjoy most

Good morning/afteroon , Miss ?/? Sir/Mr ?.
Today ,I want to introduce myself .
My name is ? .(Your name) You can call me ? .(Your given name)I am ? years old . (Your age) I have ? sister and ? brother , ? mother and ? father .(Member of your family)I am live in ? .(Your address)
I am study at ? . (Your school and class)My favourite teacher/teachers is/are ? .(Your favourite teacher/teachers)It is because ? .(Your feeling)My favourite subject/subjects is/are ? (Your favourite subject/subjects)It is because ? .(Your feeling)My favourite classmate/classmates is/are ? .(Your favourite classmate/classmates)
At weekend , I would like to ? .(You would like to do something)
This is the(D sound) for my presentation . Good bye and thank you Miss ?/? Sir/Mr ? .

唔好作一篇文咁樣介紹自己
如果唔係你就會被篇文困住,講唔到好多
你要有幾個point
1.your name
2.hobby
3.favourite
4.dislike
完果時就話,thank you for your attention!

your self:
good morning or afternoon.i'm xxx .. i'm x years old. i live in xxxxxx.. i like xxxx(e.g:play basketball,drawing),because xxx (e.g: it 's fun.it's interesting) ..
i have...... ( e.g : one sister /brother/ 獨生 )...
study in xx school..my favourite subjects are/is xxxxx( PE,chinese,english) ... i like this school because the classmates the teachers are ( e.g : nice ,friendly, kind),, i have a lot of friand in this school..
最後講多句: I LIKE MY SCHOOL VERY MUCH,, THANK YOU,

Good morning!Today i introduce myself: My name is XXX.I live in XXX. I have(how many parents).My nickname is XXX. All of my parents always use this name to call me. My sister/brother's name is XX. She/He is very XXX.
My good friend/friends is/are XXX,XXX,XXX.They all are my good friends. We always XXX.
My extra curricular activities are XXX xxx. My favourite subject is XXX. It is because XXX. And my activity is XXX. It is because XXX.
At weekend , I would like to (DO THING). It is because XXX.
This is the end of my introduce. THANK YOU!

Hello! I am xxx. i am xxx years old. i like xxx subject . i like xxxx and xxx
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