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Utilizing modern information technology and network platform, the successful combination of China International Online Travel Fair and Guangzhou International Travel Fair (GITF) 2005 may realize the purpose of promoting the travel destinations and enterprises. CIOTF provides a safe, quick and convenient online platform for deal and communication in tourist enterprises circle and between tourist corporations and consumers.