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I was born in Hong Kong 12(just an example) years ago in a hospital. Since then I was part of the Hong Kong and I am really proud of myself. To me, Hong Kong seems to be my home, the home with all my memories in it. Hong Kong is a great place that everybody grows up happily. Maybe not everyone, but definitely me. Hong Kong seems to be the real home of me, just like my very own house with my family, that are always fill with love and caring.
There are many scenic in Hong Kong that deserve everyone in the world to have a look. I’ve nearly been to everyone of the scenic in Hong Kong and for my very own opinion I think that the Ocean Park and the Lantau with the biggest Buddha statue in the world! The scene was AMAZING!
In Hong Kong I also make lots of friends. Most of them from school but there are some that I meet from church, and boys/girlsbridge. I have great fun in Hong Kong everyday. Most people want to migrate to another country but I certainly don’t want to. It’s great to go and visit and country but definitely not live there. I don’t think there are going to be another country as good as Hong Kong. I love Hong Kong!


i am only 12 years old so i couldn't use any really hard vocabulary, but still hope you don't mind...

2007-01-07 20:34:22 補充：
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Hi! My hometown is HongKong.HongKong is a big city and it also is a fun fair.
Now let me talk something fun in HongKong to you!

All of us are living in Hong Konk. What do you feel about Hong Kong? How much do you know about Hong Kong? Do you feel Hong Kong is very fun? Now let me tell you about how "Fun in Hong Kong"...

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