點寫自薦信(升中)

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We are writing to apply for an admission opportunity for our son, Tom xxxxxxx, to your good school. Tom is now studying in xxxxxxxPrimary School. Like most parents in Hong Kong, we are facing a challenge in selecting a suitable secondary school for our son. We have visited your school during the school open day in March. We are impressed by the students academic achievements & the confidence shown in their demonstration of the result of their hard work. Surprisingly, Tom, just a primary five student showed his interest in participating in the various games arranged by your students. When we left your school, Tom told us that he has decided to try his best to get into ABC Secondary School.

From March till now, Tom has been working on his own initiative and he did prove his desirability of becoming your student. Not only did he get a remarkable result for the school examination, he also managed to obtain a reference letter from his Principal. We therefore enclose his schools academic reports and the said reference letter for your consideration and hope that you would return us with an application form and grant Tom an opportunity for interview.

Thank you for your kind attention and in case you need further information, please give us a call at 9999999(Father) or 96666666 (Mother).
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This is my composition and I used for my sons application

首先:叫你家長寫封信比校長,要求佢寫推薦信...........
然後:交俾你班主任,叫佢交比校長
跟著:校長如果點頭,你班主任就會幫你打推薦信la~~

*:唔係一定會幫你打架,仲要睇你ge成績同操行..............

先寫自己的名 , ,邊間 school 之類, 之後話想入你地間xxx學校

之後再"大概"寫番自己的成績 , 詳細你張成績表有

再寫自己參加過咩活動 , 好似田徑呀 , 奧數果d , 2有參加過咩野比賽

寫埋自己的品德呀 , 同埋老師比過一d的評語

最後寫番自己對你去果間學校的期望 , 希望比個機會之類

連成績表呀 , 獎狀, 申請表一齊交

2007-01-06 16:54:48 補充：
唔使寫咩電話呀 地址. 你張申請表有啦

你要寫張信to老師,一定要有你a媽簽名..................