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Today's Guangzhou is a big modern city full of energy, with lots of ancient attractions. It's economic development, being the biggest national and foreign trade oriented city, is boosted by flourishing commercial activities. Tourism is one of the major industries of Guangzhou. Cultural attractions include the Sun Yatsen Memorial Hall, the remains of the earlier European settlement on Shamian Island, the Provincial Museum, the Old Buddhist Temple of the Six Banyan Trees and the Pearl River Night Cruise.

Today Guangzhou is a vibrant city, trendy yet nostalgic. Moreover, it is a magnet for people from all walks of life, both at home and abroad, and that contributes to the outstanding economic development and flourishing trade in Guangzhou. The tourist industry is an important pillar of the local economy. Tourist attractions like the Sun Yat-sen Memorial Hall, Shamian where used to house the residences of ambassadors from European countries, the Provincial Museum, the old Buddhist Temple of the Six Banyan Trees and the night cruise on the Pearl River are commonly found in a traveller's itinerary.