幫我再看一看～～～ｔｈｘ...英文周記

Then I played the computer games. I had my lunch at one o'clock and then I studied Mathematics.There were too many questions that I didn't know, so I preferred to go to sleep.
Next week, there will be six subjects in the examination.
If I don't work hard now, I will fail the subjects.
But I don't have any confidence in making it. Still I will do my best even I got bad grades in the past few semesters.
So I won't playing computer games next week.

In the wake of getting up, 起身之後

i played some computer games and i had my lunch at one o clock.我玩電腦 games...

After that, i brushed up my Mathematics, but i didnt understand it (之後溫數但唔識)
so i went to bed instead.(所以去左訓教)

i have to sit in the mid-term exams and also there are six subjects will be examined in the following week.(下個 week既中期試考 6 科)

Therefore, i need to work hard or i cant promote to F.X.
(所以我要溫得勤力d 否則升唔到中X)

However, i am afraid i cant do that.
但係我驚我做唔到

Although my academic results is not quite good, i finally will studise harder so that i promise myself i wont play any computer games in next week.
雖然我學業成績唔係咁好,但係我會讀得更加努力
所以我就承諾自己下個 week 一d 機都唔打

In my opinion.:



After i had a good fun with my computer, I have lunch at one o'clock.
I had read the Math text book but there were tuns of questions i didn't know how to do, so, I decided to go to have a rest.
In the coming week, I am going to have six exams. I know i am going to fail if i didn't put effort in my revisions, but i don't have the confident to face this problem.
Although my levels are not good enough, but I i am going to study hard in order have have imporvements.
Because of what i say, I am not going to play computer next week.

then Iplayed the computer games until one o'clock. At one o'clock, I had my lunch. after that, I started to read my maths book because i am going to have 6 exams next week. I, however, haven't read for so long, i don't even know how to complete every question in the maths book which made me feel down and went to sleep.
Although my previous exams are not good, i will work hard. In fact, I don't have enough confident to do well in the coming exam. Nevermind, i will try my best and not to play the computer game next week.

First I played the computer games.I ate the lunch at one o'clock.
Then I read the maths book.But I had many questions don't know how to do.
So I go to sleep.因此我去左訓教．
In next week,I will have exams for six subjects.我將會有六科考試．
If I does not work hard, I will fail in the exam.因此,我要是不用功，考試將會不及格.
But I haven't confidence to do it.但我冇信心能夠做到.
Although my result was bad,I still study hard.雖然我成績好差,但我仍會努力學習.
So i can't playing computer in next week.因此我不能在下星期打機.

我幫你改咗啲啦,但其實我英文都好差,我P.6咋~~

這是我個人的見解
After I played the computer games,I ate the lunch at one o'clock.
Then I studied the Mathematics book.But I had a lot of questions don't know how to do.
So I went to sleep.
Next week,I will have six different kinds of subject examation.
So,I will fail in the exam if I do not work harder.
But i haven't confidence to do.
Although my result will be bad,i still will study hardly.
So i couldn't play computer next week.
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