In sunday,I get up at eight in the morning,take breakfast at nine.Then I play the computer games.I ate the lunch at one o'clock.Then I read the math book.But I have many question to not know.
wrong!!It must be (On Sunday,I got up at eight o'clock in the morning.I took breakfast at nine o'clock.Then I played the computer games.I ate the lunch at one o'clock.Then I read the maths book.But I had many question I do not know.)
我幫你修改下a:
On sunday,I get up at eight in the morning,then I have breakfast at nine.After that I play computer games.I have lunch at one o'clock.Then I read the math book.But I don't know too many questions .They are hard.
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2007-01-05 22:53:30 補充:
sorry.we must have past tense.On sunday,I got up at eight in the morning,then I had breakfast at nine.After that I played computer games.I had lunch at one o^clock.Then I read the math book.But I don^t know too many questions .They are hard.
有少少唔對,應該是:
On sunday,I get up at eight in the morning,take breakfast at nine.Then I play the computer games.I eat the lunch at one o'clock.Then I read the maths book.But I don't know to have many questions .
2007-01-05 22:41:02 補充:
sorry,the tense must be past tense.get>gottake>tookplay>playedeat>atedon't>didn't
應該是這樣,我想:
In Sunday,I(you should use past tense) up at eight in the morning, I had my breakfast at nine.Then I played computer games.I had(I think you should use have suppper) lunch at one o'clock in the afternoon(I don't know whether use 'in the afternoon or not').Then i read the Math book,and I don't know many questions.
2007-01-05 22:33:22 補充:
In Sunday should 'On Sunday'.
In(On) sunday,I get(got) up at eight in the morning,take(and had) breakfast at nine.Then I play(played) the computer games.I ate the lunch at one o'clock.Then I read the(my) math book(textbook).But I have(had) many question(questions) to not know(don't know how to do/answer).