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wrong!!It must be (On Sunday,I got up at eight o'clock in the morning.I took breakfast at nine o'clock.Then I played the computer games.I ate the lunch at one o'clock.Then I read the maths book.But I had many question I do not know.)

我幫你修改下a:
On sunday,I get up at eight in the morning,then I have breakfast at nine.After that I play computer games.I have lunch at one o'clock.Then I read the math book.But I don't know too many questions .They are hard.
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2007-01-05 22:53:30 補充：
ｓｏｒｒｙ．ｗｅ　ｍｕｓｔ　　ｈａｖｅ　　ｐａｓｔ　　ｔｅｎｓｅ．On sunday,I gｏt up at eight in the morning,then I hａｄ breakfast at nine.After that I playｅｄ　 computer games.I haｄ lunch at one o＾clock.Then I read the math book.But I don＾ｔ ｋｎｏｗ　 too many questions .They are hard．

In Sunday > On Sunday

I get up at eight in the morning,take breakfast at nine. > I got up at eight o'clock in the morning and took breakfast at nine o'clock.

Then I play the computer games. > Then I played computer games.

I ate the lunch at one o'clock. > I ate lunch at one o'clock.

Then I read the math book.But I have many question to not know. > Then I read the maths book but I had many questions about it.

有少少唔對,應該是:
On sunday,I get up at eight in the morning,take breakfast at nine.Then I play the computer games.I eat the lunch at one o'clock.Then I read the maths book.But I don't know to have many questions .

2007-01-05 22:41:02 補充：
sorry,the tense must be past tense.get>gottake>tookplay>playedeat>atedon't>didn't

應該是這樣，我想：
In Sunday,I(you should use past tense) up at eight in the morning, I had my breakfast at nine.Then I played computer games.I had(I think you should use have suppper) lunch at one o'clock in the afternoon(I don't know whether use 'in the afternoon or not').Then i read the Math book,and I don't know many questions.

2007-01-05 22:33:22 補充：
In Sunday should 'On Sunday'.

In(On) sunday,I get(got) up at eight in the morning,take(and had) breakfast at nine.Then I play(played) the computer games.I ate the lunch at one o'clock.Then I read the(my) math book(textbook).But I have(had) many question(questions) to not know(don't know how to do/answer).

on sunday
i got upat eight
took breakfast
played the computer
math's book
i had many questions do not know