有沒有人可以幫我改一改文法&改通順一點??(英文好的請進)

The style of Cantonese cuisine is characterized.It is variety of cooking methods and noted for its color, fragrance, taste, and presentation. Since Cantonese cuisine is the fourth famous in the county, “Eating in Guangzhou” reflects the characteristics of its catering market and has became a popular saying both at home and abroad. In addition, the delicate Cantonese pastry and dim sum are also well-known for its wide range of varieties, delicious flavor and beautiful color.


(I think it is more good now...~~~)

Cantonese cuisine is characterized by its diversified cooking methods and noted for its colour, smell, taste and presentation. Cantonese cuisine is among the top 4 cooking styles in terms of popularity and the phrase "eating in Guangzhou" which reflects the flourishing catering market in Guangzhou has also been frequently quoted both at home and abroad. In addition, the delicate Cantonese pastry and dim sum are also well-known for its diversity,deliciousness and nice colours.

Since Cantonese cuisine is among the most of famous four in the county
呢句is among the most of famous four 怪怪地，country我稔你唔小心打錯

改做 Since Cantonese cuisine is ranked among the most famous four in the country /
Since Cantonese cuisine is one of the most famous four in the country

2007-01-05 14:28:45 補充：
其他都應無問題，寫得好..或者可以用其他形容詞例如appealing look/color/appearance 我自己覺得好過 beautiful color