可唔可以幫我轉做英文?

阿sir,我想問GE ||| exam裡面writing果part,個email係咪要寫埋date?
因為我好清楚記得上堂0既時候,你有提過email要寫自己email,收件人email,日期,subject,我仲寫低左0係notes,所以我有寫埋date,但係我之後聽有d同學講又話唔洗寫,咁其實係洗唔洗寫架呢?

Sir, (or Mr. XX), I would like to ask whether a date is needed for the email in the writing part of GE III exam. As I clearly remember that you mentioned during class that my own email, addressee's email, date and subject have to be included in the email, and I have jotted it down, so I have written a date. However, I have heard from some classmates that the date is not required. Please advise whether a date is needed, thanks.

阿sir,我想問GE ||| exam裡面writing果part,個email係咪要寫埋date?
因為我好清楚記得上堂0既時候,你有提過email要寫自己email,收件人email,日期,subject,我仲寫低左0係notes,所以我有寫埋date,但係我之後聽有d同學講又話唔洗寫,咁其實係洗唔洗寫架呢?

Sir, (or Mr. XX), I would like to ask whether a date is needed for the email in the writing part of GE III exam. As I clearly remember that you mentioned during class that my own email, addressee's email, date and subject have to be included in the email, and I have jotted it down, so I have written a date. However, I have heard from some classmates that the date is not required. Please advise whether a date is needed, thanks.

阿sir,
Dear Mr. XX,

我想問GE ||| exam裡面writing果part,個email係咪要寫埋date?
May I ask a question about the Writing in GEIII? Should I mention the date in the email?

因為我好清楚記得上堂0既時候,你有提過email要寫自己email,收件人email,日期,subject,
我仲寫低左0係notes,所以我有寫埋date,
If I have remembered right, you have mentioned in the class that we should mark the sender's email address, the receiver's address, the date and the subject. I have written all these points on my notebook.

但係我之後聽有d同學講又話唔洗寫,咁其實係洗唔洗寫架呢?
Anyway, some classmates told me not to. Well, Sir, should I or should I not?

Awaiting your early reply.

Yours,
XXX

2007-01-05 00:27:38 補充：
Sorry, I have overlooked the word "exam". Well, may I alter the first setence a little bit in this way?我想問GE ||| exam裡面writing果part,個email係咪要寫埋date?May I ask a question about the Writing in GEIII exam paper? Should I mention the date in the email?

Excuse me, Sir.
I have a question to ask you. It is about the exam paper two, the writing part. Do i need to write down the date in the e-mail?
Iask you because i clearly remember that you have mentioned that we have to inculde my e-mail, receiver's e-mail, subject and the date. i also noted it down so i did. But later on, my classmates told me that it was not necessary. So do I need to write down the date?

2007-01-04 23:50:09 補充：
第一個答既用程式譯,我自己譯ga

其實你可以唔寫，你試下send e-mail 給自己看下……

中文**


阿sir,我想問GE ||| exam裡面writing果part,個email係咪要寫埋date?
因為我好清楚記得上堂0既時候,你有提過email要寫自己email,收件人email,日期,subject,我仲寫低左0係notes,所以我有寫埋date,但係我之後聽有d同學講又話唔洗寫,咁其實係洗唔洗寫架呢?


英文**

Arab League sir, I want to ask inside GE ||| exam writing fruit part, email is the onamot must write buries date? Because I quite clearly remembered attends a lesson 0 both the time, you have raise email to have to write oneself email, addressee email, the date, subject, my Zhong writes lowly is left 0 is notes, therefore I have write bury date, after but is me listens to have the d schoolmate to deliver and the speech not to wash writes, then actually is washes writes?