Keeping up the good work to strive my best .
Always ensure that I had tried my best in every test .
Homeworks have to be submit on time as,
Every pieces of it, is a precious assessment for us to try .
illegible handwriting is also not acceptable.
If there is any grammar or spelling mistake , please help me to correct it .
is there any problem in my poem
2007-01-05 4:18 am
回答 (3)
2007-01-05 1:19 pm
✔ 最佳答案
1.英文既 HOMEWORK唔系1份份可以數到既所以唔應該加S
EG 如果你想表達好多HOMEWORK只可以用A LOT OF/SO MUCH(NOT SO MANY)
2. 改左上面呢個
HOMEWORKS HAVE TO BE就應該改成HAS TO BE
3.HAVE TO BE SUBMIT
應該改成HAS TO BE SUBMITTED 因為BE+VERB既時候系ALWAYS+PP, HOMEWORK系被動既, 被你去交
(SUBMIT亦可以用HAND IN取代, 個人覺得HAND IN用在GOMEWORK上比較COMMON)
4. "EVERY TEST"冇加S系岩既
所以後面EVERY PIECES都唔駛S
EG. EVERYONE (ONE=單數)
EVERY PERSON IN THE SOCIETY而唔系EVERY PEOPLE
希望幫到你=)
2007-01-06 2:45 am
this is a poem?
2007-01-05 4:23 am
this is a really good poem, you do not need to correct it. But.... there is no tiltle! --3--
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