Many hardworks had to be done to achieve our goals .
Yet , stressful is not the word for me to use .
Support from my friends make my heart feel warm .
Everyone in my class is important to me .
Learning is not the only reason for me to come to school as
Friendship make my live meaningful .
if there is any mistake please help me to correct it
is there any problem in my poem
2007-01-05 3:36 am
回答 (2)
2007-01-05 4:18 am
✔ 最佳答案
I am not sure if (hardwork) is countable or not. Maybe it should be (hard work). In the last line, you should add a (s) on the word (make).
Also, this (live) is a verb. You should use the noun (life).
i.e. Friendship makes my life meaningful.
I think the others are okay. Your poem is quite good and meaningful!
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2007-01-05 3:40 am
No any problem in your poem .excellent!
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