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The handicraft industry in Guangzhou is renowned throughout the country for its unique features and history.
Among (among 只适用于 eg: Among the hardware, the making of keys is the most popular, 这时候是不能用 all 的) the hardware (keys, knives, flashlights), umbrellaS, leather products, furnitureS (especial the carved mahogany furnitureS) are all well-known in the world.
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Besides handicrafts, Guangzhou is also internationally recognised for the making of hardware such as keys, knives and flashlights, as well as other merchandise such as umbrellas, leather products and furnitures, especially carved mahogany furnitures.

Furthermore, the art ware is renowned IN (don't need 'the') ivory, gem, iron, porcelain, and golden-wood carving for its excellent designS. On the other hand (Additionally / ), the embroidery is prominent for its beautiful patterns and exquisite craft.
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Furthermore, in the artware industry, the carving of materials like ivory, gem, iron, procelain and golden-wood is well known for its excellent designs. Embroidery shares the fame in artware, as it is prominent for its beautiful patterns and exquisite handcraft techniques.

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