有沒有人可以幫我改一改文法&改通順一點??(英文好的請進)

The official language in China is Mandarin. However, in most people use the local dialet, Cantonese, inGuangdong (including Hong Kong). Cantonese has an independent tradition of written vernacular. A lot of people can also speak Mandarin, except for the elders, who live in Guangzhou. The name of the phonetic transcription of Mandarin is Pinyin. Due to internationalization, younger generations are requested to learn English at school.

Mandarin is an official language in China. However, in its Guangdong province such as Hong Kong, the local dialect is Cantonese - an independent tradition of written vernacular. In fact, most Guangzhou people, except the elderly, can speak both language. The phonetic transcription of Mandarin is "Pinyin". Nowadays, following the social development and internationalization, most of the youngsters are required to learn English in school as well.

In China, the official language is Mandarin (or Putonghua), with the name of the phonetic transcription "Pinyin". However, in Guangdong, especially in Hong Kong, Cantonese is the local dialect that has an independent tradition of written vernacular . Most people there can also speak in Mandarin except for elders in Guangzhou. With the development of sociality and internationalization, youngsters need to acquire English skills from schools.

2007-01-08 10:26:25 補充：
這位仁兄的文法錯誤都成為發問者的最佳回答，可見發問者也不是中立的。In most people已經錯得很離譜。

The official language in China is Mandarin. However, in Guangdong and in Hong Kong the local dialect is Cantonese which has an independent tradition of written vernacular. Most of people can also speak Mandarin, except for older people who are living in Guangzhou. The name of the phonetic transcription of Mandarin is Pinyin. With the development of sociality and internationalization, most of the young people require knowledge of English language which they learn from school.