有沒有人可以幫我改一改文法&改通順一點??(英文好的請進)

As all the above(??), the writer WILL introduce the general information of Guangzhou COMPRISES OF locationS, climateS, population (no commas needed) and time differences. THEN the types of analysis of the social and CULTURAL impacts of development WILL BE DISCUSSED. IT INCLUDES socio-cultural impacts, factors influencing socio-cultural impacts, the demonstration effect, measurement, acculturation, and its future plan. The writer is expected to realize(??the writer writes the report, then the writer expects to realise what his findings are through the report, that doesn't make sense) the advancement of tourism impacts of Guangzhou through the report.

Is it a report or an essay? Is it the conclusion or the intro? ('cos you used 'as all the above' like a conclusion, and 'the writer is going to discuss...' like an introduction)
You can send the whole essay, i will send you a message with my email address.
Only do it if you don't mind, it would be easier for me to check the grammar as a whole.

As all the above, the writer is going to introduce the general information of Guangzhou comprise location, climate, population, and time different.

It's difficult to know what you mean in this sentence....would you pls tell in chinese before I can give comments...

As possesses in above, the writer introduced Guangzhou the total showing including the place, the climate, the population, is different with the time. Second, the type to the development society and the cultural impact analysis including the socio-cultural impact, the factor affects the socio-cultural impact, the exemplary role, the survey, the cultural exchange, with its future plan. The writer was estimated realized Guangzhou the tourism attacks advancement through report.