我係一個夜校中五夜校生,我有一篇英文作文要做,因為我程度不好,可唔可以幫我做個sample,250字

In modern city such as Hong Kong, it is believed that there is only a small number of primary schools do not adopt education of computer.
We are so lucky that almost every family in Hong Kong does have at least one computer and majority of HongKongers can afford the expense of accessing into the internet.
In recent years, the education of information technology inside schools have been strengthened.
Personally speaking, learning computer is more efficient through practical training by computers then reading computer books.
The knowledge on computer textbook is just for reference, but not providing all knowledge in computer world that we demanded for.
We should absorb and understand the knowledge provided by computer textbooks and apply them to real life.
Comparing to other academic subjects, Computer is more emphasized on practical training.
Undoubtedly, computer concept is essential for understanding the world of information technology.
However, necessary amount of practice can help us understand the operation of computer much easlier.
For instance, we will not know the structure of the server until we open it.
And we might feel puzzle towards the operating of the internet until we surfer into it and enjoy the merits it had brought to us.
It is widely known that the information technology has been improving everyday. There is a must for us to upgrade our computer knowledge by get in touch with computers more often.

2007-01-04 20:20:55 補充：
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