a composition about a suggestion to improves a shopping mall

其實如果你諗到好多point~即是你諗到好多SUGGESTION, 我相信我唔駛晌度俾point你, 反而係點帶起條題目~~
個人有以下suggestion

In the city, numerous shopping malls are found on many streets. Under such a competitive market of developing shopping malls, there should be a way to improve a shopping mall so that it can be an attractive scene for people.

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