作文....writing a letter of advice...
講一個朋友有一d困難...所以寫信比我...而我要回覆佢...
opening paragraph要"show that I feel sympathy" for him regarding his problems.....
唔係好識點開場白好..thz....
英文作文....opening paragraph
2007-01-02 12:22 am
回答 (3)
2007-01-02 12:49 am
✔ 最佳答案
I am sorry to hear that you are facing this problem now (whatever the problem is).....It is nice to hear that you come to me for advise. I am delighted to give you my advise.....
2007-01-05 6:36 am
The recipient is facing a problem, so you shouldn't use the verb "delighted". You may say "I would like to ..." Moreover, "advise" is the verb, you should use "advice" (noun) instead.
2007-01-02 1:18 am
I am sorry to hear that you are facing this problem now (whatever the problem is).....It is nice to hear that you come to me for adviCe. I am GLAD to give you my SUGGESTIONS.....
上面, 大致上都ok, 要注意 adviCe (n.) adviSe (v.)
另外, 作文最好唔好用重複字眼, 令文章看起來更簡潔
上面, 大致上都ok, 要注意 adviCe (n.) adviSe (v.)
另外, 作文最好唔好用重複字眼, 令文章看起來更簡潔
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