英文作文問題

2007-01-01 7:55 pm
我要寫一篇"聖誕節家居裝飾"既功課啊!!
大概100字左右
要點寫啊??
求大家幫幫手...40分架!!

回答 (3)

2007-01-01 8:05 pm
✔ 最佳答案
1.寫用咩去裝飾家居(balloon, Christmas tree)
2.如有Christmas tree, 用咩去裝飾
3.同邊個一齊裝飾???
4.裝飾完後,你d family or friends 有咩感覺(例:It's beautiful!)
參考: me
2007-01-02 4:14 am
如果寫咩聖誕節普天同慶,裝飾唔少得,呢d就太普通太悶。亦令到寫呢篇文既目的係純粹為左交功課。

作呢d描寫文,又唔係描寫風景,所以寫唔到好有文學feel;我應該加個故事背境落去。個故事唔使複習,我隨便都諗左幾個,你可以參考下。
1)同家人/女友鬧左交,係佈置既情況下互相幫助合作,最後大家和好返
2)媽媽逝世,經過同心合力咁佈置,令到失落既一家人重新振作。
3)同朋友/同學一齊佈置,去做一個驚喜比女朋友/失戀既人

有左故事既背景,就可以用第一段黎交代背境,咁就唔使寫"普天同慶,裝飾唔少得"呢d"行"野。
透過故事,令到你可以順住故事流程去描寫唔同既家居。而寫故事記得要描述埋各個佈置者既心情(亦可以增加字數啦XDD),講下大家點樣重拾親情/友情/愛情,大家點樣由唔好既心情變成笑臉,咁會令篇作文既趣味提高,唔會平舖直敘。


***作文既標題可以叫做"Christmas Decoration Day's reward"**,呢個只係一個例子,讓人引起興趣,會想知道有咩reward。

有咩唔明講低,我會覆返,希望幫到你(又羅到分XDD)
2007-01-01 9:42 pm
第一段(general situation)eg:In view of the Christmas holidays is approaching.I've decided to decorate my home which can probably create a cosy atmosphere to my guests on the ground that they would come to join the worthy Christmas party that was dated on 25th December.

第ニ段(experience+result)Initially, it was quite confused in my mind that how to decorate my home.I have to notice that the christmas tree I bought could not be too large.On the one hand,realising that our home has only 560 square fits.on the other hand,the colour of the assessories are mainly red and green.Thereby I bought a christmas tree which is medium in size,decorated it with a punch of bulbs,surrounded it by red and green boxes at the bottom of the christmas tree.

第三段(opinion+expectations)As a result, all guests were amazed when they saw my decoration.They were engaged in the christmas party,showing that my effort was succeed.Most imporantly,I've learnt a lesson-sucession must required one's sweat.


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