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The dog jumps like a rabbit while it runs like a lion. Also, there are some small dogs. For example, lris wah wah,Shi Nasha, etc. Many girls love them and I will buy one,too.

續句解碼...

The dog jump time is looklike a rabbit.

第一,你用dog就加's',一係用'dogs'...單數singular好似he,she,it要's'...
第二,冇'looklike',只有'look like/like'

The dog run time is looklike a lion
一句只可以有一個main verb(主要動詞)...run,is-->兩個係錯

Also has some dog is very small,for example:lris wah wah,Shi Nasha and other.
has...係就係中文=有...不過呢句一定要用'are'..'have'都係錯!!
你幾個example一定要some dogs啦

They is many girl like .therefore I will buy a dog.
They跟are
many girls
like冇問題,不過太多like呢個字...太少變化...一定唔會高分ga!

建議你補習喇...

回答者"eyecyc"o既答案錯o既..

Dogs jump like rabbit. Dogs run like lion. Some dogs are small. For example, Chihuahua and Shih Tzu. Many girls love these dogs. So, I will get one.

問題是你不理解句子結構。最簡單的英文句子也必須有動詞(命令式)。例如：
Sit
Come
除了動詞，還要分便作動作者(主詞)及接收動作者(受詞)。
一般簡單的句子結構：
主詞 + 動詞 [不及物]
e.g. He runs.
主詞 + 動詞 + 受詞
e.g. I love dogs.
主詞 + 動詞 [連綴] + 補語
e.g. She is happy.
主詞 + 動詞 + 受詞 [簡接]，受詞 [直接]
e.g. I give her a dog.
主詞 + 動詞 + 受詞 + 受詞補語
e.g. She makes me happy.

決定了時式後再用以上句式作句。

(動詞有很多類別--連綴動詞，動作動詞[及物、不及物]，輔助動詞及情態動詞；還有時式--12種時式當中，我們一般常用的只有5種。而代名詞亦要小心用，主詞用主格代名詞，受詞用受格代名詞。)

The dog jumps like a rabbit, and it runs it like a lion. Also some dogs are very small
, for example: lris Wah Wah, Shi Nasha etc. There are many girls like these kinds of Dogs, so i should buy one for the girls.


remerber: he ,she, it. the verb have to have a s follow the word it example: like = likes.....sleep=sleeps

we, you ,they, no s.......

ok....... ^.^

Beware of wrong tenses, prepositions and sentense structures can improve your english

When the dog jumps, it looks like a rabbit. And, when it runs, it looks like a lion. Some dogs are very small in size such as Iris wah wah, Shi Nasha, etc. Many girls like these kinds of dogs; therefore, I would buy one too.

要注意 grammer and the link between sentences.

When the dog jump, it is look like a rabbit.When the dog run, it is looklike a lion.Also some dog is very small,for example:lris wah wah,Shi Nasha etc.They are many girl favourite .therefore I will buy a dog.