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2006-12-25 4:01 am
every countries or cities both have own culture. When they go to new place , they may suffer a strange culture. For example, they casually take a photo in their life environment. The resident may hate them .Because residents think that is a impolite thing. I think they should say sorry immediately and tell the resident that they come from other countries or cities, so don’t know there culture. After , they can find some information about this countries or cities culture.
回答 (3)
2006-12-25 4:30 am
✔ 最佳答案
第一行：(1) 應該係 "every country or city has its own culture" ，要記住every之後要用單數
(2) when they go to new place，當中個they係指邊個？
第二至五行：
- 呢幾句係"fragement sentence"，句子是散句，而你要記住用"Because"開始一句唔係正
規
- "so don't know there culture"係句有啲問題，最好改為"so they do not know their
culture"
最後一行建議改為：
....about the cutlure of this country or city
this之後要跟單數
these之後先至可以跟眾數
eg. this country or city.....
these countries or cities.....
希望可以幫到你
2006-12-25 5:34 am
CULTURE SHOCK
( def : the feeling of shock and anxiety that we may have when we visit a foreign country or a new place for the first time. )
There are different cultures in different countries.
Tourists and expatriates may find it difficult to adapt to the various cultures.
For instance, sometimes when the locals see the tourists taking photographs, they may feel angry and consider the tourists impolite and offensive.
I personally think that the tourists should immediately apologize and explain to the locals that they are from other countries and sincerely do not mean to offend them.
Actually, we should gather more information about the customs and cultures before visiting a foreign country or a new place for the first time.
Hope this might help.
( def : the feeling of shock and anxiety that we may have when we visit a foreign country or a new place for the first time. )
There are different cultures in different countries.
Tourists and expatriates may find it difficult to adapt to the various cultures.
For instance, sometimes when the locals see the tourists taking photographs, they may feel angry and consider the tourists impolite and offensive.
I personally think that the tourists should immediately apologize and explain to the locals that they are from other countries and sincerely do not mean to offend them.
Actually, we should gather more information about the customs and cultures before visiting a foreign country or a new place for the first time.
Hope this might help.
參考: merry Xmas
2006-12-25 5:08 am
my version:
Culture varies form country to country. When a citizen visit a foreign country, he may find that the foreign culture is different form his motherland. For example, you may take photos in the country that you are visiting casually, however, the local may view this as an impolite behaviour. It's true that you should apologize immediately and let the locals know that you are a visitor who know nothing about the local customs.
I don't understand the meaning of the last sentence. You better rewrite it.
Culture varies form country to country. When a citizen visit a foreign country, he may find that the foreign culture is different form his motherland. For example, you may take photos in the country that you are visiting casually, however, the local may view this as an impolite behaviour. It's true that you should apologize immediately and let the locals know that you are a visitor who know nothing about the local customs.
I don't understand the meaning of the last sentence. You better rewrite it.
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