改grammer, 最好改formal d, part 3

Though I usually shop on Granville Road, I shop at malls too such as Langham Place and APM sometimes. APM is attractive to me, not only because it is brand new, but also consistently on-trend because many teenagers favorite brands have their stores opened there, to name a few, they are i.t. and b+ab. Additionally, I am lured by the monthly mall events. APM is now become the hub for young and groovier shoppers mainly in part to the reason that it has local artists visited the mall such as Aaron Kowk in order to draw more shoppers.

2006-12-23 07:53:14 補充：
Modification: Replaced 'is now become" by "soon becomes".It looks like this after modification:APM soon becomes the hub for young and groovier shoppers mainly in part to the reason that it has local artists visited the mall such as Aaron Kowk in order to draw more shoppers.

With a low budget, I usually do my shopping at Granville Road. However, I shop in shopping malls like Langham Place and APM at times. Although APM is a new shopping mall, it has made a great impression on me. Not only that there are many brands favoured by young people, such as b+ab and i.t, the mall hosts events. Famous artists like Aaron Kwok are regularly invited to perform in shows, which would attract many shoppers to visit the mall. That is why it is becoming a centre of youthful and trendy people within a short period of time.

2006-12-31 23:17:10 補充：
I can easily spot a lot of grammatical mistakes in your answer - next time please make sure you are 100% certain of your writing before teaching somebody to write properly. You have indirectly contributed to his misunderstanding of the English language by providing him with incorrect English.

Due to my low budget, I usually shop on Granville Road. However, sometimes I do shop in shopping malls such as Langham Place and APM. APM is a new shopping mall which attracts me a lot since it has a lot of youth favortie brands such as b+ab and I.T.. In addition, APM always hold different events and invite famous artists like Aaron Kwok to do a show in order to attract visitors. That's why APM becomes a center of young and trendy people in such a short period of time.