英文自我介紹的文章!!!!

2006-12-21 5:34 am
我報那間中學要自我介紹的文章,要英文的!!
請幫我修改我的結尾!!!! 致萬分感謝!!!!

When I grow up, I want to be a doco]tor because I can care for sick eople and I also can safe some people 's life! I think this jov is really / very greatness!

順便幫我釋下: 我希望可以幫病人減輕痛楚.
釋成英文!!!!!!!!!!!!

回答 (3)

2006-12-21 7:31 am
✔ 最佳答案
When I grow up, I want to be a doctor because I can take care for the sick people and I also can save some people 's life! I think this job is very greatness!

I hope I can heip the sick people to lighten their painful.
2006-12-21 6:32 am
坦白說,單是你這段結尾就錯漏百出,我建議你把整段自我介紹拿出來讓人更改吧!

When I grow up, I want to be a doctor because I can care for sick people and I can also save some people's lives. I think this is a great job!

我希望可以幫病人減輕痛楚. I hope I can help the patients to ease their pain.
2006-12-21 5:46 am
很有問題呀~

When I grow up, I want to be a doctor because I can care for sick eople and I also can safe some people's life! I think this job is very greatness!

問題
What is those word mean???
1.doco]tor
2.eople
3.jov


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