幫我翻譯成英文呀! 10分

幫你解左兩個中、英解法一同二>>一係你自己文筆、二係幫你改o岩及轉左文筆
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(一)錯
我的英文不大好!真係好對唔往呀!
請問你有無MSN Messenger 呀?如果有你可唔可以比我呀?
>>>錯>> 我係黎自香港嫁!你可唔可以多d 寄e-mail 比我呀!
可能我的英文不太好,真係好對唔往呀!
我係12歲!
希望你多d回信比我啦.

(一)錯
My English is not very good! Really fasten correctly well!
Could you tell me that is there (MSN Messenger) ? Well than I all more right that if have you ?
>>>錯>>> Since Li of our department marries in Hong Kong! You can well, may large d send e-mail to than I!
The very good of English of me,it fasten really it is to well!
Our department is 12 years old!
Hope that you a lot of d write back than I.

(二)對
對不起!因為我的英文不算好!
想請問你有沒有申請MSN Messenger ?如果有你可否給我?
我是香港人!可否寄多些e-mail 給我!
可能我的英文不太好,真的對不起!
我現在是12歲!
希望你多些回信給我吧!!

(二)對
I am sorry! It is not very good because of my English!
Would like to ask you whether you have apply for (MSN Messenger) ? If you can give to me?
I am the Hong Kong people! Could send some more e-mail to me !
Perhaps my English is not very good, really sorry!
I am 12 years old now!
Hope how you are a bit that writes back to give to me! !

中文：

我的英文不大好!真係好對唔往呀!
請問你有無MSN Messenger 呀?如果有你可唔可以比我呀?
我係黎自香港嫁!你可唔可以多d 寄e-mail 比我呀!
可能我的英文不太好,真係好對唔往呀!
我係12歲!
希望你多d回信比我啦~^^

英文：

I'm sorry about that I'm not very good at English.
Do you have your MSN? And can you give me?
Ah, I come from Hong Kong! Could you send more e-mail to me?
I think my English really bad, so sorry!
I'm now twelve years old!
I hope you can send more letters toward me~^^

My English is not excellent! Really is good to not toward! Whether there is ask your MSN Messenger? If has you to be possible not to be allowed to compare me? I am Lebanon marry from Hong Kong! You may not be allowed multi- d to send e-mail to compare me! Possible my English not too good, really is good to not toward! I am 12 years old! Hoped your multi- d reply compares me~^^

My English is not that good, sorry about that.

I am wondering if you have MSN messenger, can I have your screename if you have one?

I am 12 and from Hong Kong, I would appreciate if you could send me emails more often and I sure hope we can keep in touch!

Again, please excasue my English.

2006-12-20 18:57:15 補充：
修正:can I have your screename if you have one. <-- screen name 不是screename. 句號,不是問號I am 12 and I am from Hong Kong. <-- 追加I am Again, please excuse my English. <-- excuse 不是excasue

2006-12-20 18:57:57 補充：
My English is not that good, sorry about that.I am wondering if you have MSN messenger, can I have your screen name if you have one.I am 12 and I am from Hong Kong, I would appreciate if you could send me emails more often and I sure hope we can keep in touch!Again, please excuse my English.

2006-12-20 19:11:33 補充：
注釋:美國人指的screen name等於messenger裡面的的稱號.絕對美式用詞. 精簡兼易明, 就係美式英語特色.

2006-12-20 19:25:13 補充：
樓上果o的 I COME from Hong Kong 絕對係錯~想講從一個國家/城市來係 I am from Hong Kong

sorry, my english isn't very good / fluent

do you use msn messenger?
if you do, can you give it to me?/ do you mind giving it to me?

i come from hong kong! send email to me when you are free

sorry, my english isn't very good / fluent

i'm twelve

i'm looking forward to receiving your letters

我並唔係用翻譯網的` 所以GRAMMAR沒錯`
而且唔會禁FORMAL=]

do you have MSN Messenger?
請問你有無MSN Messenger 呀?

if yes, would you give me?
如果有你可唔可以比我呀?

I'm come from hong kong.
我係黎自香港嫁!

Can you send me e-mail more frequently? i want to know more about you ( 自己加的 可以del )
你可唔可以多d 寄e-mail 比我呀!

My english is pretty poor enough, hope you don't mine about that
可能我的英文不太好,真係好對唔往呀!

我係12歲!
i'm twelve!! ( or add "years old" )

looking forward to receive your letter again
希望你多d回信比我啦~^^

I am sorry about that my English was not good.
I would like to know do you have MSN Messager? if you have would you mind give me?
I am from Hong Kong and I would like you send me more E-mails to me when you are free.
I hope You can understand what I am talking because I know my English is not good enough.
I am looking forward your e-mail.