求英文高手re-write - 10分!!!

Using transparent bags is to let the customer see through the bag and be able to count the amount of different things in the bag more easily. If anything is missing, they can return the unopened package to us. Otherwise, we will not be responsible for any missing of the components. As for a full kit assembly, it will first be wrapped with bubble wrap, then wrapped again by polythene materials. Next, I will put the package into a wooden box with its service manual. Finally I will use metal straps to tie the box tight.

After packing, I will stick the correct packing list on the package. The packing list will state the number of boxes, the shipping adress and the receiver.

Finally, I will call Fedex to come at 6. They will pick up all the boxes for shipment of different orders, and a typical day should be finished by then.

Using transparent bags lets the customers to count the quantities easier. If there is any item missing, they can return it to us in its original state without breaking the packing. Otherwise, we shall not be responsible for any missing components but for a full kit assembly only. It will firstly be wrapped in a bubble pack and then by some polythene materials. Next, I will put it in a wooden box with a Service Manual, and use some metal straps to reinforce the outside of the box. After that, I will stick on each wooden box a correct packing list showing the total number of boxes with the correct shipping address and receipent.

Finally, I will call Fedex to pick up all the shipping boxes for different orders at 6:00pm and to complete the delivery on a specific day.

By using see through bags, customer can notice the number of components in the bag and make sure there isn't any component missing. However if there is any missing component in the bag, we suggest the customer to return the whole package to us or otherwise we are not responsible for any missing component.But for a full kit assembly, it will first be wrapped in a bubblepak, and then wrapped with some polythene materials. Next, I will put it into a wooden box with service manual, and use metal straps to reinforce the outside. After that i will have to stick the correct packing list on every bag(i am not sure about the packing, a box? the bag?also what did you mean by Attn?)
Finally, i will give a call to Fedex at arround 6 o' clock in the afternoon and ask their staffs to pick up all the shipping boxes in different orders and a typical day should be finished by then.
Although it's not really good and i don't understand some of it, also i am not sure if they are 100% correct, this is what i can do for you, i hope it helps~~>v