求英文高人re-write及改grammar - 10分!

If the customer agrees our prices, he will fax his purchase order to me. When I receive it, I will fax a sales order back to him, listing the terms of payment, delivery, insurance and warranty. If he agrees all of them, he will sign the sales order and will fax it back to me. Otherwise, we will continue our negotiations for a conclusion. After that, I will give a notification to our Inventory Department for the preparation and delivering to me the items requested by the customer for packing and packaging. For light components, they will be firstly wrapped in a transparent plastic bag, sealed by a sealing machine and then packed in a Fedex box.

If the customer is satisfied with our pricing, they will fax us their purchase order to me. After I receive it, I will return them with a sales order form. It will state our company policies, including payment amounts and procedures, delivery itineries, insurance and warranty terms. If they agree with all of the terms, they can returned the signed copy to me. Otherwise, we will continue negotiating until we come to a compromise.

Afterwards, I will send a notification to our inventory department. They will follow the instructions on it and prepare for the items that the customer has requested. They will send me the items for packing and packaging.

For light components, they will first be put into a transparent plastic bag, machine-sealed, and packed into a FedEx box.

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2006-12-20 06:03:10 補充：
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