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Woody and his friends were SOME SIX-YEAR-OLD TOYS boy called Andy. One day, Andy got a newest toy called Buzz. Buzz got a lot a high-tech equipments on him. WOODY, BEING ANDY'S FAVOURITE TOY, WAS THREATENED OF HIS STATUS. Woody hated Buzz because BUZZ DREW EVERY ATTENTION OF ALL OTHER TOYS (keep an eye on 解有看管的意思). Therefore Woody planned ON HOW TO MAKE Buzz leave. Unfortunately Buzz really got lost and Woody had to save him. During THE INCIDENT, Buzz and Woody DEVELOPED a very strong friendship between them!

Toy store is one of my favourite CARTOON MOVIES. I was impressed by the friendship that they DEVELOPED. At the begining of this film THE two of them were enemies. However, they HELPED each other WHEN THEY WERE in distress. From that time on, they've become friends FROM adversity.

The message which THE story brings out is THAT friends are precious and we need to treasure our friends. IN ADDITIONAL, we need to give a hand to our friends when they are in need. In short, this film is worth INTRODUCING to others.

If everyone in this society can FOLLOW they message that the story brings out, the world will be extremely perfect.

2006-12-18 17:07:28 補充：
第一句打少左 of Woody and his friends were some six-year-old toys of a boy called Andy.

Woody and his friends were toys of a six years old boy called Andy. One day, Andy got a new toy, Buzz which was a high-tech toy. (All the toys kept on an eye on everything what Buzz did. )SORRY I DON'T KNOW WHAT U MEAN? So Woody felt it was a threat to his high status and wanted Buzz to leave.Unfortunately, Buzz really got lost and Woody had to save him. During that time, Woody and Buzz built up a very strong friendship between each other.