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2006-12-15 5:30 pm
Sports Days

In the Sports Days , i feel very boring because i didn't take part in anything .
That doy , it's very cold and always raining , so many events cancelled , many people take the medals , i'm very jealous them.

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2006-12-15 5:36 pm
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In the Sports Days , i feel very bored because i didn't take part in anything .
It's very cold and always raining on that day, so many events were cancelled. Many people take the medals which makes me very jealous.
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2006-12-15 6:49 pm
In the sports day, I really felt very bored because I took part in nothing except being one of audiences. It was a deadly cold and rainny day, so many events were cancelled. As a matter of fact, to see a lot of schoolmates taking their medals, I had a bit of jealousness towards them.
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2006-12-15 6:15 pm
In the Sports Day ,
i felt very bored because i didn't take part in anything .
it was very cold and rainny day ,
so many terms of competitions and races has been cancelled ,
many participants took their medals ,
i'm very jealoused with them.
2006-12-15 5:39 pm
In the Sports Day, I felt very bored because i haven't take part in anything. That day, was very cold and always rain, so many events cancelled. Many people took the medals, I am very jealous of them.


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