英語,想一想,改一改....10分!!

In my opinion, going on business trips ARE not only ABOUT MEETING the objective(s) of the trip, but also ABOUY PAYING attention to one's personal safety. As for me, if I HAVE A chance to go to an undeveloped country, I WOULD scan my ID card and passport as jpg files and put them in my e-mail box before I GET (GETTIING 都得) ready to go. This way I can HAVE a proof of my identification in case if I lose all of my credentials.

Besides that I WOULD do the same thing with the factory's address and other EMERGENCY contact information as well. Also after arrival, I WOULD be glad to follow the instruction GIVEN BY the company, whether it is on food, living, or going out, until the trip IS DONE.

In my opinion, going on business trips is not only about meeting the objective of the trip but also paying attention to one's personal safety. As for me, if I have a chance to go to an undeveloped country, I will scan my ID card and Passport as jpg files, and put them in my e-mail box before getting ready to go. This way, I can prove (vb) my identity in case I lose all of my credentials (documents?).
Besides, I will do the same thing with the factory's address and other ungert (urgent?) contact information. Also, after the arrival, I will be glad to follow the instructions of the company, no matter on daily diet, accommodation and outting, until the trip is over.

i tried to keep your original meaning and only focus on grammar. please see if you are happy with it.