求高人英文文法re-write, please!!!

I think when a company look for candidates, mainly they focus on the following:

Firstly, the applicant's basic requirements such as school record, language skills and computer skills.

Secondly, the applicant's communication ability such as how they communicate with colleagues, boss, customer and suppliers.

Thirdly, the applicant's work manner such as the willingness to learn, attitude towwards routine work, if they mind to work overtime, and if they mind to have business trips to China.

Fourthly, the applicant level of understanding towards the work nature, such as job duties and how familiar they are with the industry.

Lastly, the applicant's work goal such as if he/she is willing to make a long-term commitment to the company.

I believe I have fulfill the above requirements, if your company also think I am a qualified canditate, then please consider carefully my application.

I think that companies look at the following criteria when considering candidates:
1. Basic qualifications: academic records, language proficiency, and computer skills
2. Personal communication ability: Could the person communicate with his/her collagues, boss, customers and suppliers?
3. Work attitude: Is the person willing to learn? Would he/she mind routine work, overtime, or business trips to China?
4. Understanding of job nature: Does the candidate know the job duties and how familiar is the candidate with the industry?
5. Commitment: Would the candidate be a long-term employee?

I believe that I do well in the above areas. I appreciate your consideration of my application.

XXX The "I do well" part is too cheesy. It would be better for you to talk about how you do in each area and illustrate with examples to show what you are capable of, instead of talking about generalities.