- Ms. Burns, we (have/had???) made the changes you asked for.
- "If there are not something to change", let's go ahead and sign the contract. 怪怪地,改寫"..."部份
- I'm glad that we've agreed on the terms after repeated (negotiation/negotiations???), and I hope that it will lead us to (other???) further business (cooperation/cooperations???).
更新1:
還有: - our next job is to see if this contract (can be/could be???) carried out smoothly. - 求"I hope so"的alternatives. - I hope everything will be satisfactory (in/at???) the end.