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There are many scenic spot in Hong Kong.[ Don't use have ]
Let's introduce [wrong spelling] Ocean Park. [ no need to use to you at the end ]
It's one of the place for [ not to ] you.
There are many exciting games in Ocean park for you. [ 比較通順]
You may [ not can ] watch killer whale, sea lion, butterfly, etc. [etc. is better]
Moreover, there are dolphin and sea lion shows. [ 句子不通]
Ocean park will keep open[welcome?] to you.
Don't miss the chance!

There are many scenic spots in Hong Kong, Let me introduce you one that you should never miss, it is Ocean Park.
In Ocean Park, you can enjoy a lot of exciting games there and also have a sight of natural animals such as killer whale(但是殺人鯨已經死了很久）, sea lions, butterflies and so on. And I think you will be deeply enchanted by the great performance of dolphins and sea lions during their shows. Ocean Park is really a good place, you are welcomed always, so you should not miss the opportunity of having a journey there.

In Hong Kong there are many scenic spots.Let me introdance Ocean Park to you.It is one of the place you must visit.
In Ocean Park,you can play many exciting games.Moreover,You can watch the killer whale,Sea Lion and butterfly and soon.You also can watch the Dolphin and Sea Lion Show.Ocean Park will welcome you,so don't miss the chance

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