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The stock has been sent to you by DHL and you should receive them on xx December 2006.

Thanks!!

Kindly note that we had sent over the order No. XXX to you via DHL on (date). expected arrival time will be XX Dec 2006. please acknowledged upon receipt

嘩!, 准尉, 不是吧, 你這句...........you will be received(by.....)怎可以將對方成為貨物而變了 passive voice? 應是 the goods will be received (by you), 除非將對方空運才會說對方'被'收到.

I have already sent out the commodities that you ordered by DHL,
you will receive them on Dec xxth, 2006.

"批貨我已經用空運公司(DHL)寄出,批貨你將會 xx Dec 2006 收到"

The stock has been sent to you by DHL and you should receive them on xx December 2006.

The goods had been sent by DHL and you will be received it on or before Dec XX 2006.