請大家help我睇下我呢兩篇野有冇要改既地方~

你呢兩篇野應改成:
My favourite cartoon character is Winnie Pooh.Pooh has a pair of little ears,small eyes, a round face and a very big and round tummy.He always wears a short,red T- shirt.Although he is a bear,he unlikes most bears.He doesn't eat meat and he only drink honeys.
Besides,he can talk and he is a yellow bear.He is generous and helpful.When his friends get into troubles,he will help them.
He is always joyful and optimistic.