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2006-12-10 5:40 pm
Because this school besides results of mechanics ,but also encourages the schoolmate to participate in the result
different type curricular activity and the sports,
I thought like this may excavate schoolmate different ability, is helpful the student fullscale development

因為這所學校除了著重學業成績外,還鼓勵同學參加不同類型的課外活動和體育運動,我覺得這樣可發掘同學不同的才能,

有助學生全面發展。

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2006-12-10 5:57 pm
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Because this school not only focuses on academic results, but also encourages its students to participate in different extracurricular activities and sports, I think that this arrangement allows students to discover their talents and faciliates their comprehensive development.
2006-12-10 6:25 pm
Because the school studies result of strength besides this, and encourage those classmates that participate in those results
Activities and sports of different type courses,
I think that like excavating classmate's different ability in this way , helpful student's development is fullscale


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