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Storm water drainage is one of the essential supporting systems during rainy season and after the thaw. The Wavin Group, our hotel storm water drainage system supplier, has over fifty years of experience and offers an integrated consultation as well as product support.

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The storm water drainage is one of the essential supporting systems especially during the rainy season period and after the thawing period. The Wavin Group, our hotel storm water drainage system supplier, within its over fifty years' experience in this professional field, is capable of offering a series of integrated consultation and product support for your assistance.

風暴排水是特別是雨季和在融化之后支持系統的本質之一。 Wavin集團，是我們的飯店豪雨排泄系統供應者，有超過50 年經驗，提供結合的協商和產品服務

The Storm Water Drainage system is one of the essential supporting programs during rainy and thaw seasons. The Wavin Group, our hotel's "only"? "most important"? storm water drainage system supplier?controller? which has over fifty years experiences offering integrated consultaion and product support.

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