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It is very obvious and clear to discover that Fire Safety Equipment are installed insides every parts of hotel such as lobby, guestrooms, kitchen and restaurant. They are significant portion in the operation of the property management. The components of a hotel fire safety system include fire sprinklers, smoke and fire detectors, automatic alarm systems, emergency lights, exit signs, smoke control systems, portable fire extinguishers, the emergency egress system, manual alarm systems which is a box placed near stairway doors and elevators, and so on.

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