轉做英文，謝謝！

1.
Firstly, thank you for spending your precious time to read my letter.

2.
I know that from reading my academic report card, my results and qualities are not very outstanding, and it will be hard for others to believe me that I will really work hard to learn English in the coming year. However, what is in my mind is that I really want you can give me a chance and let me put effort in my studies and to prove to you that I have the heart to do this.

2006-12-06 22:00:55 補充：
2....... However, what is in my mind is that I really want you can give me a chance, let me to contiue working hard. I hope you can let me to show you that I will put effort in my studies.

1. First of all, I want to thank you for reading this letter.
2. I noticed that my academic report card had shown my quality and it is really bad. I know it is difficult to make you believe that I have tried my best in learing English during the year. However, I still hope you can give me an opportunity to keep it up.

1: Hand first is it thank you find time time look askance my letter to want!
2: I know I achievement, achievement of form look terms block up very much really, make someone else believe I make great efforts learning English this year while being difficult very! But I hope you can give me a chance to let me continue making great efforts!
It don't transfer to strange his meaning to want the English syntax!Thanks

1. Firstly, I would like to thank you in taking time to read my letter.

2. I know that my school result is not too good. Its difficult to make people belive that I have worked hard on learning English this year. But I hope that you would give me a chance so that I will keep on to work harder.

2006-12-08 08:50:07 補充：
雖然呢篇比有兩三篇好些少. 但覺得佢幾累贅, 當中亦有gramatical mistake. 發問者要留意.

1.First of all, I want to thank you that find time to read my letter .

2.I know ,my achievement is really very bad ,It is not very apt to make people believe, I have made great efforts to study English by oneself this year .But I hope that you can give me a chance let me continue making great efforts .

小弟英文水平不高,如有不足,敬請原諒

dear ............................

Thank for you see my letter

I know my mark is bad .Anought my mark is bad I have studyenglish harder in so I want
you to give me to do this work


Yours sincerely
xxxxxxxxxxxxx ---------------------- sign and write your name

2006-12-06 22:00:50 補充：
dear ............................Thank for you see my letterI know my mark is bad .Alought my mark is bad I have studyenglish harder in so I wantyou to give me to do this workYours sincerelyxxxxxxxxxxxxx ---------------------- sign and write your name

i have some don't not.
1.first,i am very thanks for you read my letter.
2.i know my 成績表 is not good ,it is to hard to make the other people to know i have very hard to learn english for a year but i would hope you can let me 繼續努力！