請改正英文文法

Ｗｉｓｈｅｓ　ｐｅａｃｅ　ｏｎ　ｅａｒｔｈ　ａｎｄ　ｅｖｅｒｙ　ｃｈｉｌｄｒｅｎ　ｗｉｌｌ　ｈａｖｅ　ａ　ｊｏｙｆｕｌ　Ｃｈｒｉｓｔｍａｓ．

Ｇｏｄ　ｂｌｅｓｓ　ｅｖｅｒｙｏｎｅ　ｔｏ　ｂｅ　ｓａｖｅｄ　ｆｒｏｍ　ｅｖｉｌ．

every一定係跟singular noun，即every child，並非every children~!
eg. 我地係話every day，而並非every days~

I wish for world peace and every child a joyful Christmas.
I wish every one to be saved from evil, by the grace of God.

* every / each 之後要跟 singular noun & singular verb, 所以 every children 係錯的

I wish the world will be peaceful and every children has a joyful Christmas.

I wish everyone is saved from evil and blessed by God.

I wish for world peace and that every children shall have a joyful Christmas.
I wish that everone could be saved from evil, by the grace of God.

2006-12-06 08:56:40 補充：
wish和名詞之間要加for. 雖然each和every都解作"每一個",each著重"每一個"中的"一個",而every著重"所有" wish指希望未來的事,所以應該跟未來式(will,shall[都會]),或可能形(can,could[都可以]),由於是願望不是事實,所以shall好過will.名詞"children"後不能跟形容詞"all",形容詞應在名詞前,這裡children之前已用了every,不用再加all.

2006-12-07 23:44:13 補充：
every children應該改成every child