"向我們借了以下物件" 英文點寫？

貴司向我們借了以下物件
your company has borrowed the following items from us.

要求歸還向以上的物件
please return the above mentioned items.

完全無問題, 唔知點解有人會評「普通」?

貴司向我們借了以下物件
The expensive department borrowed following article toward us
想向對方要求歸還向我們借出的物件
Think the article that returns toward us to borrow toward the other party request

please note according to our record of the following items which were lent to your company dated XX-XX-XX. will be grafeful if you could return after use.

item list..
XXX
XXX
XXX

公司是不會向你們借物品的, 只有對方那負責人才會向你們公司借那些物品, 所以要發信和問就問那個代表他們公司向你公司借物品的人了, 因此你那句便要指名道姓對方公司那個負責向你司借物品的人.

應為:

1. Mr. XXX of your company had borrowed from our company following items:

2. Please return the following items which you had borrowed from our company.

貴司向我們借了以下物件
Your department has borrowed the following things from us

想向對方要求歸還向我們借出的物件
Want to demand to return it to the things that we lent out to the other side

2006-12-06 21:49:39 補充：
kimmy

貴司向我們借了以下物件
We lend this thing for your company.

想向對方要求歸還向我們借出的物件
Please return this thing for us.