英文文法 - urgent!!!!!!

1）Because they want their application forms to look good enough to get each of them a job. (This is still an odd sentence because application forms cannot "look" good -- a form is a form. The sentence is very Chinglish.)

2) The market needs a big demand.
What meaning are you trying to express here? Generally, within a country, you would use the word "the market" because there is only one financial market. If you want to use "market" to mean something else, you may want to be more explicit.

3) So I think both upscale goods and fair-priced goods willl have their own respective markets.

4) The heaviest box must be this one.

5) Moreover, a/the rumour about the resolution... (the use of the article depends on what you have in ...)

6) It is the only way to succeed. 這是成功唯一的方法。 It is the only way to be succeeded. 這是繼任唯一的方法。

1,a job
2,market/needs
3,wrong:repectively--->respectively
market
4,it must be THE one
5,a
6,succeed/be succeed is ok depends on what you'd like to express