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2006-12-04 4:26 am
Kung-fu Madness" is an action comedy.The film is set in HK in the present day.The plot is very simple, love story.A Kung-fu teacher loves his new student.There are two characters.There are the Kung-fu teacher Ho San is played by Steven Chau and a new student Mei Ling is played by Lily Yeung.

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2006-12-04 5:32 am
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Kung-fu Madness" is an action comedy. The film is produced in HK nowadays . The plot is very simple and it is a love story. A Kung-fu teacher loved his new student. There are two characters, the Kung-fu teacher named Ho San who was played by Steven Chau and a new student named Mei Ling who was played by Lily Yeung.
"Kung-fu Madness" had good action scenes which were fantastic. The special effects were excellent and good acting of characters. The bad ending of the film made people disappointed. The film was good for family.
2006-12-08 4:38 am
好好!
2006-12-04 8:54 am
你是不是想話齣戲的背景是現代?
咁應該是 The film is set in present-day Hong Kong.
如果想話是近幾年拍的,
The film is made recently in Hong Kong .

重寫如下:

"Kung-fu Madness" is an action comedy. The film is set in present-day Hong Kong. It is a very simple love story, which is about a Kung-fu teacher falling in love with his new student. There are two main characters, the Kung-fu teacher named Ho San played by Steven Chau, and a new student named Mei Ling played by Lily Yeung.

"Kung-fu Madness" has fantastic action scenes. The special effects are excellent and so are the acting of the characters. Though the bad ending of the film is disappointing, the film is still a good family film.

2006-12-04 00:59:30 補充:
另外, simple 同love story 中間不用有逗號, 因為love story本身可當作一個noun,正如love song, love affair, love child等等都是noun,所以不是有兩個形容詞另外太多who...who...好累贅所以都改做過去分詞played


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