1. I went to the park with my brother and his frind last sunday afternoom .
2. We played with football on the football field , then we went on and roundabout the park.
3. We made a sandcastle on the sandpit,and climbed the climbing frame.
4. We made a sandcastle on the sandpit,and climbed the climbing frame.
5. Soom we were tired and sat on a bench for awhile, then we went home by cycling each other.
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2006-12-04 1:07 am
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2006-12-04 1:18 am
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1. I went to the park with my brother and his friend last sunday afternoon.2. We played football on the football field ,then we went to the park.
3. We built a sandcastle on the sandpit in the park ,and climbed the climbing frame.
4. We built a sandcastle on the sandpit in the park ,and climbed the climbing frame.
5. Soon we were tired and sat on a bench for awhile, then we went home by cycling each other.
2006-12-04 1:11 am
1. I went to the park with my brother and his friend last sunday afternoom .
2. We played with football on the football field , then we went on and roundabout the park.
3. We made a sandcastle on the sandpit,and climbed the climbing frame.
5. Soon, we were tired and sat on a bench for awhile, then we went home by cycling each other.
改左小小炸...
2. We played with football on the football field , then we went on and roundabout the park.
3. We made a sandcastle on the sandpit,and climbed the climbing frame.
5. Soon, we were tired and sat on a bench for awhile, then we went home by cycling each other.
改左小小炸...
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