I went to the park with my brother and his frind last sunday afternoom .
We played with football on the football field , then we went on and roundabout the park.
We made a sandcastle on the sandpit,and climbed the climbing frame.
Soom we were tired and sat on a bench for awhile, then we went home by cycling each other. 請改正錯誤的文法，謝謝！
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2006-12-04 12:37 am
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2006-12-04 2:43 am
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I went to the park with my brother and his friend last Sunday afternoon. We played football on the football field , then we went on and walked in the park.
We made a sandcastle on the sandpit, and climbed up the climbing frame.
Soon we were getting so tired and we sat on a bench for a while, then we went home together.
2006-12-04 12:56 am
你個friend字串錯,soon字都係!!!!
We played with football on the football field 應We played the football on the football field
We played with football on the football field 應We played the football on the football field
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