請代作簡短英文作文

2006-12-04 12:37 am
I went to the park with my brother and his frind last sunday afternoom .
We played with football on the football field , then we went on and roundabout the park.
We made a sandcastle on the sandpit,and climbed the climbing frame.
Soom we were tired and sat on a bench for awhile, then we went home by cycling each other. 請改正錯誤的文法,謝謝!

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2006-12-04 2:43 am
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I went to the park with my brother and his friend last Sunday afternoon.
We played football on the football field , then we went on and walked in the park.
We made a sandcastle on the sandpit, and climbed up the climbing frame.
Soon we were getting so tired and we sat on a bench for a while, then we went home together.
2006-12-04 12:56 am
你個friend字串錯,soon字都係!!!!
We played with football on the football field 應We played the football on the football field


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